She rushed in all full of fear and desperation screaming something about things not being as they appear to be. “Everyone has it all wrong!”, she said, “We are nothing but numbered lozenges of purchasing power; little human batteries that keep everything going and going and going. I don’t want to be a fucking rabbit!” I glared at her and agreed with a knowing smile and then went back to what I was doing. I said, “It just so happens that I am working on a way to pull the plug on all those little batteries”, and hit the enter key.
Dialogue That Zings with Laura Besley - November 7 & 8
Learn dialogue from every angle, from giving each character a distinct voice to avoiding info dumps and knowing when to cut a tag.
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