In the wild, untamed ocean—not on the maps anyone knows—there’s a gaping chasm: perfectly round, deceptively deep. Water spills over the edges, cascading falls that claim many a ship and crew.
That’s how I designed it.
In this waterfall-ringed pit, there’s a growing cove of shipwrecked strangers-turned-companions determined to survive—and escape.
I watch, delighted. Occasionally, I descend, belaying the waterfall. They watch me—their god of wind and waves—eager for bread crumbs.
Occasionally, one lucky soul escapes the proverbial woods, climbing the falls after me.
That’s how I designed it.
Because I’m hungry and tired of fish.
An entire world in 101 words – condensed speculative micro fiction at its very best
Thank you! That’s so kind!
You packed a lot of story in a few words. The gaping chasm conjures up the image of a giant open mouth. Your first person character is quite intriguing.
Thanks! Really appreciate it!
great images and ending
Thank you!
Well done!
Thank you!
strong imagery- I followed the narrator right down in…
Thanks!
Very well written!
Very creative and engaging. Loved it.
Hello Eric,
Wow!! Flash at its finest! Well done.
Appreciate it!
Great job!
Excellent story, Eric. well done. Thanks for sharing!