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Heat

July 1, 2016 3 Comments

Heat

By Lee DeAmali

He says no in a way that makes me feel dirty for asking.

I know he’s lying, can see the telltale bulge, aware of what it means.

I’ve got one, too, tucked away, available with the flick of a well-practiced wrist.

He’s moving away but I keep him in my sights, steaming hot and setting my neck hair on edge.

I’m conflicted with my instincts. Leave, stay close, or sound an alarm and possibly look like an asshole.

Maybe it’s just this heat. Or the cool metal barrel snug within my waistband. Or something else I just don’t want to admit.

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    July 1, 2016 at 9:44 am

    Great atmosphere. I’d have to call this one suspenseful-scary. Good job.

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  2. dimitriosotis says

    July 1, 2016 at 10:08 am

    Neat!

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  3. lquisp says

    July 2, 2016 at 3:13 pm

    Very gritty. Nice job.

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