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Last Cup of Cocoa

October 17, 2018 7 Comments

Last Cup of Cocoa

By John M. Carlson

Sheila and Steve sat drinking cocoa late one evening.

Sheila sipped, and thought about the poison she’d slipped into Steve’s cup. She was sick and wouldn’t live much longer, but at least she’d be freed from her horrible marriage. His death would be ruled a suicide, thanks to a fake note she’d made.

Steve sipped, and thought about how he’d poisoned Sheila’s cocoa. He’d soon be free of his demanding, sick wife! Her death would be called a suicide, because of a fake note he’d prepared.

Their bodies were found the next day. Detective Kenny investigated, and concluded: “It’s double suicide.”

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  1. Meghashri says

    October 17, 2018 at 7:11 am

    Nice twist!

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  2. cascondaville says

    October 17, 2018 at 8:37 am

    Oh, those two! Great minds alike? 😉

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  3. taekwondocathy says

    October 17, 2018 at 11:06 am

    Nice!

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  4. Brian says

    October 17, 2018 at 3:19 pm

    Great story. The ironic twist made me think of the old Alfred Hitchcock Presents show.

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  5. Gerald Kamens says

    October 17, 2018 at 8:55 pm

    Guess they didn’t have no-fault divorce where they lived! Jerry

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  6. Neil Tarpey says

    October 18, 2018 at 9:17 pm

    I enjoyed the realistic murderous motives. Nice double-dose-of-poison twist on Shelia & Steve. What about a follow-up story? [e.g., Sheila & Steve wake-up handcuffed together in some afterlife.]

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  7. Mary E Falkner says

    October 20, 2018 at 3:46 am

    Neat ???

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