By Violet James
Cool breeze rustles the autumn leaves, crinkling like love letters discarded among the trees.
My words were hollow, I know. A melody of disjointed notes. Erratic thoughts scribbled on the page. Loneliness torments my soul.
I was a fool not to say it. You deserve more.
In the midst of heartache, moonlight illuminates your silhouette. A smile kisses your lips, your arms outstretched, and forgiveness softens your eyes. I relish the delicate brush of your hand. The cadence of your soliloquy. The scent of your hair.
I melt into your warm embrace, and whisper solemnly against your sweet lips. āIām sorry.ā
The romance runs through the poignancy, yet it ends with hope. Lovely.
I’m so humbled by your kindness. It was a piece that flowed from a place deep in my subconscious. So it’s nice to know you interpreted it how I meant it. There is always hope. š Thank you, dear friend.
Wonderful story, Violet. Such beauty in your words.
You are so kind Jennifer. I’m blushing.
Nice imagery.
Thank you Susan š
The narrative was quite captivating. I especially love the opening line. Specificity in detail coupled with a simile that sets the tone for the narrative.
Wow Thank you so much John, that means so much to me.
Gorgeously poetic and graceful.
Thank you so much Kelly.
Lovely
Wow! A melody in prose!!
A small story with a great heart. What an enjoyable and lovely read. Nice work, Violet.
This piece echos the pain of life experience within compassionate honest reflection. The forgiveness I see is twofold. We may long for it yet it is a gift we may give ourselves. The challenge of a powerful message in 101 words has been achieved quite eloquently. Congratulations! D
A beautiful scene.
Wow, just beautiful:)
Beautifully captivating expression in prose.
Lovely. To me, the last line says it all. Perhaps the final word ….