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Macaroni Prophesy

April 15, 2019 7 Comments

Macaroni Prophesy

By Cassandra Hamilton

The oracle prophesies, “The River bubbles over; threatening the town below. The only way to stop it is to place a bomb in the macaroni factory. Detonate it. Watch elbow macaroni shoot to the sky and rain upon the river—thus clogging like an artery. Join us at the river with your red sauce!”

“What does that mean?” the hand-wringing female client asks.

The oracle shrugs; reluctant to share that the vision foresaw a man’s heart attack and his acrobatic mourners celebrating. Let me be wrong.

She isn’t. Next day, the client’s lover dies. Carny friends perform backflips at his funeral.

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  1. Rosemary Reader and Writer says

    April 15, 2019 at 2:12 pm

    Conjures up a surreal picture, even the fulfilment of the prophecy.

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    • Cassandra Hamilton says

      April 16, 2019 at 1:41 pm

      Agree. Although I hope no one dances at my funeral – I’d think fellow carny folk doing back flips for me would be quite an honor.

      Reply
  2. Debbie Irvine says

    April 16, 2019 at 4:56 am

    Wonderful writing! Great weaving of metaphors, images and meanings on multiple levels to validate the powers of Oracular Visions.

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    • Cassandra Hamilton says

      April 16, 2019 at 1:42 pm

      Thank you, Debbie, for this generous feedback. I’m honored by your thoughts.

      Reply
  3. David says

    April 17, 2019 at 11:20 am

    Good one!

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    • Cassandra Cassandra Hamilton says

      March 14, 2021 at 8:20 pm

      Thank you!

      Reply
  4. Yurek says

    August 5, 2021 at 12:00 pm

    If this was my dream I would cook the elbow macaroni in the house and take a short trip

    Reply

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