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Mae

April 29, 2016 7 Comments

Mae

By Dante A Murray

Mae had a large X where her left breast once was, like someone had marked a pirates’ map indicating where gold was buried. When we made love Mae worried the X would disgust me. She told me so and we both cried.

She bought snow globes when she learned of more bad news. When you shook her favorite snow globe—a man and women eating dinner by candlelight—it played ‘I Only Have Eyes for You.’

Each night I sit in my chair, snow globe in hand, and shake it like hell.

Mae is always there, sitting across from me, smiling.

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    April 29, 2016 at 9:17 am

    A beautiful little story of lasting love and loyalty. Loved it!

    Reply
  2. writingmywayoutofdepression says

    April 29, 2016 at 9:56 am

    Beautifully written as you felt sad for Mae straight away and then felt the loss of the one she left behind.

    Reply
  3. Deepak says

    April 29, 2016 at 6:39 pm

    Great story.

    Reply
  4. Michael D. Brooks says

    April 30, 2016 at 5:06 am

    Very powerful story of love and loss. Well done.

    Reply
  5. Lady Judith says

    May 2, 2016 at 6:26 am

    I have read MAE, so many thoughts you have and so many feelings. I love it

    Reply
  6. jeffswitt says

    May 3, 2016 at 12:17 pm

    Superior writing, indeed!

    Reply
  7. Dante A Murray says

    September 24, 2016 at 1:31 pm

    Thank you all for your feedback. I did not realize anyone had commented on the story until today.thank you.

    Reply

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