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Maybe It Was

November 8, 2016 8 Comments

Maybe It Was

By Robb Lanum

Janine could see the future. Not just the end of the world in 7954 or the Yankees winning the 2063 World Series, but what she would eat next Tuesday. That her husband David would leave her in 14 years. What her miscarriage would feel like.

Future events competed with memories inside Janine’s harried mind, no discernible difference between them.

Had she eaten yet that night? Or was that next Tuesday?

She shared her secret only once: with her sister after David left her. Margaritas were involved. She regretted it even before it happened.

Janine could see it like it was yesterday.

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  1. Roy Dorman says

    November 8, 2016 at 10:02 am

    Good one , Robb. You made the impossible seem like something that was really happening. I see a bright future for you.

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  2. Virginia says

    November 8, 2016 at 10:40 am

    Omg this is brilliant! I want more!

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  3. soulriver says

    November 8, 2016 at 11:28 am

    Excellent! Very smoothly written. Well done! And the idea was so inventive and brilliantly executed!

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  4. Dante Murray says

    November 8, 2016 at 11:57 am

    Robb, now my only regret in life is I didn’t write this story. Wonderful read!

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  5. M.C. Neuda says

    November 8, 2016 at 12:35 pm

    Well done, Robb! Very well done indeed!

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  6. Philip James Sterwerf says

    November 18, 2016 at 12:17 pm

    I keep coming back to this story. I’ve been telling everyone about it. It is relatable in the strangest way, and is the perfect balance of experimentation and established craft. Keep up the great work, Robb.

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    • Robb says

      December 6, 2016 at 9:39 am

      Just now saw this. Thanks so much, Philip – I appreciate it.

      Reply
  7. Robb says

    December 6, 2016 at 9:41 am

    Thanks everyone for the kind words. The encouragement is inspiring.

    Reply

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