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Metamorphosis

March 17, 2017 2 Comments

Metamorphosis

By Jo Varnish

His baseball mitt lay lifeless in the trunk, among a million tiny squares of glass. Under the crumpled, caved-in roof, the policeman had wedged the twisted bumper awkwardly across the back seat.

I reached in, grabbed the mitt, shook it, and held it close. Just three hours earlier, he had yelled, “Mom, I’m going for a catch,” while heading to his car—this car, that had spun and rolled like a toy, and ultimately given up, defeated, its innards filled with foul smelling airbags, its body battered and bashed in.

And my boy had emerged, with only that fickle invincibility bruised.

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  1. Peter G says

    March 17, 2017 at 5:20 am

    Every parent’s nightmare captured perfectly, with a sigh of relief.

    PG

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  2. Janet says

    March 17, 2017 at 5:39 am

    Reads like a poem. Feelings and images artfully and genuinely described.

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