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Moving out

October 30, 2007 4 Comments

By Peter Hitchmough

Everything I have worked for I have lost. How can I work more than forty hours a week and still have my home taken from me? Two years back sub prime meant nothing to me; now I wish I never heard them. I feel sick in my stomach when I think of the kids. The bank still sits all splendid down on 9th St.

I’ve got a gun. Maybe I’ll go and find a convenience store and get me some cash. Maybe I’ll make and end of the kids and me. Maybe I’ll throw it in the river. God help me.

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  1. janwithaplan says

    March 4, 2008 at 7:50 am

    I’m hoping this fictional and not autobiographical.

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  2. claudia says

    April 1, 2009 at 5:25 pm

    I’m afraid you might end up on an episode of Most Shockin “Dummest criminals”

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  3. davidbdale says

    July 15, 2010 at 7:49 pm

    You’ve got a gun and you hate the banks but you plan to rob a convenience store? Where’s the justice in that? Shoot a banker.

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  4. the good doctor says

    December 23, 2010 at 5:25 am

    ” Maybe I’ll make and end of the kids and me.”

    do you mean AN end of the kids?

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