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Napping

December 26, 2016 10 Comments

Napping

By Fred Vogel

When she walked into the den, he was on the beige tweed couch with his hands folded neatly across his stomach, enjoying his daily nap. A book of Raymond Carver short stories was lying open on the round marble table. He couldn’t read for more than twenty minutes at a time these days without dozing off. He was wearing a pair of brown cargo shorts, a burgundy and white Dunder Mifflin T-shirt, and gray golf socks. His hair was still damp from a recent shower and his face cleanly shaven. He couldn’t have been dead for more than an hour, tops.

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  1. rogershipp says

    December 26, 2016 at 4:35 am

    Passing by while doing what you love….

    Reply
    • Fred Vogel says

      December 26, 2016 at 8:29 am

      We should all be so lucky.

      Reply
  2. Roy Dorman says

    December 26, 2016 at 6:45 am

    Very nice work, Fred.

    Reply
    • Fred Vogel says

      December 26, 2016 at 8:28 am

      Thank you, Roy. I appreciate the kind words.

      Reply
  3. Claire says

    December 26, 2016 at 3:43 pm

    Love that twist 🙂

    Reply
    • Fred Vogel says

      December 29, 2016 at 5:47 am

      Thank you, Claire

      Reply
  4. Bobby Warner says

    December 26, 2016 at 5:13 pm

    Highly descriptive writing–and a smashing ending. Loved this one!

    Reply
    • Fred Vogel says

      December 29, 2016 at 5:48 am

      Thank you, Bobby.

      Reply
  5. jfxmcl says

    January 2, 2017 at 1:07 pm

    Nice twist, well delivered

    Reply
  6. Brian G says

    January 3, 2017 at 12:26 pm

    Hey Fred,
    Didn’t see that one coming. Good work!

    Reply

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