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Pancakes and Grass

February 8, 2016 8 Comments

Pancakes and Grass

By Peter J.

“I’m not crazy!” Violet snapped. She wasn’t sure this was true, but she was only ten.

“Who else sees words in smells and colors, Violet?” her brother said.

Violet didn’t reply. She’d heard music from the next room: familiar scents of syrup and fresh earth filled her nostrils.

“Pancakes and grass,” she mumbled.

The lyrics were yellow, black, and lavender to Violet.

“Can you smell that?” she asked.

“I smell that you’re crazy.”

Leaning back against the couch, Violet closed her eyes. She let the scents and colors kaleidoscope in her mind.

This opulent synesthetic world was hers alone to enjoy.

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    February 8, 2016 at 10:07 am

    This one is very surreal and delightful.

    Reply
  2. Carinna Botelho-Howard says

    February 8, 2016 at 10:14 am

    Thank you, Bobby!

    Reply
  3. Barry O'Farrell says

    February 8, 2016 at 3:58 pm

    A wonderful fresh take on perspective. Original!

    Reply
    • Carinna Botelho Howard says

      February 9, 2016 at 8:42 am

      Thank you Barry, I appreciate it!

      Reply
  4. Fran Scott says

    February 8, 2016 at 6:49 pm

    Synthesthesia is a beautiful thing. Used to be we were all mad, but there is some scientific understanding of this phenomenon now.

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    • Carinna Botelho Howard says

      February 9, 2016 at 8:46 am

      Many thanks, Fran, I think it is truly an under-studied and under-appreciated condition.

      Reply
  5. Smila W. Planete says

    February 29, 2016 at 11:52 am

    And her name is Violet! You have a writing style, Carinna, that is frank and open, where characters seem to thrive in spite of critique and mockery. This, and other stories you have written, simply ooze an inherent personal strength. I’m more than impressed.

    Reply
    • Carinna Botelho Howard says

      April 15, 2016 at 4:32 pm

      Thank you so much, I’m a sucker for an underdog, lol. I really appreciate your high praise!

      Reply

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