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Preparations of the Unwashed

November 1, 2023 3 Comments

By Ethan Freckleton

His heart: raw coastline. Sharp edges, reef, volcanic rock.

His head: hot. Fearful of the ocean, whose touch renders hurt inert.

He clings to the prospect of an imminent death, desiccated fingers in a vice grip round the mouth of a 33-gallon cinch sack. In this, he deposits bottles of discarded plastic waste. Rubber oars squelch, then slap at the sidewalk like sea-foam. In search of salvation, he treads pavement like he treads water.

The ocean, unsubtle goddess, collects without cause or care. The unwashed, unclaimed, unrepentant.

Defiant, he collects.

His collection: a buoy, a raft, a pyre.

She comes tonight.

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  1. Tim Goldstone says

    November 1, 2023 at 7:10 am

    Wonderfully poetic prose.

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  2. Erin L. Swann says

    November 1, 2023 at 1:41 pm

    Love your prose. It has such a TEXTURE!

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  3. Pamela Cartlidge says

    November 2, 2023 at 2:49 pm

    I love the bit about the unsubtle goddess collects without cause or care.

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