Win Cash Prizes & Get Professional Feedback @ Flash Fiction Magazine
Learn More
  • Skip to primary navigation
  • Skip to main content
  • Skip to primary sidebar

101 Words

101 Word Short Stories

  • Subscribe
  • About
  • Submissions
  • Volunteer

Reset

August 8, 2023 7 Comments

By Jacqueline Seaberg

Things began disappearing after Cam started using again. Grandpa’s gold-plated pocket watch. The PlayStation. Anything and everything from Mom’s purse. The work laptop I had to replace out of my paycheck.

Eventually, Cam himself went missing.

Three years later, he knocks on my door apologizing with an ever-widening smile.

Haltingly, I let him in.

“Remember the good times?” he asks. “Pranking Mrs. What’s-Her-Name in third grade?”

“Mrs. Lopez?”

“Yeah, and that janky car you were so proud of buying at sixteen?”

“Janky or not, it was a Thunderbolt.”

We part as brothers.

That night, my phone is abuzz with bank notifications.

Share this:

  • Share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook
  • Share on Threads (Opens in new window) Threads
  • Share on Bluesky (Opens in new window) Bluesky
  • Share on X (Opens in new window) X
  • Email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email
  • More
  • Share on Tumblr (Opens in new window) Tumblr
  • Print (Opens in new window) Print
  • Share on Telegram (Opens in new window) Telegram
  • Share on Mastodon (Opens in new window) Mastodon
  • Share on WhatsApp (Opens in new window) WhatsApp
  • Share on Reddit (Opens in new window) Reddit
  • Share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window) LinkedIn
  • Share on Nextdoor (Opens in new window) Nextdoor
  • Share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest

The Power of Imagery with Nina Schuyler

September 12 & 13 on Zoom
Enrollment closes Thursday, September 3 at 7:00 PM Pacific

If your descriptions are vivid but your stories still feel thin, this workshop is for you.

Join award-winning author Nina Schuyler to learn the difference between description, which tells a reader what things look like, and imagery, which carries plot, character, and meaning at the same time.

In just two days, you'll learn to choose images that hold emotion without naming it, pair them so each one deepens the other, and build patterns that gather meaning as the story moves.

Learn More and Enroll

Reader Interactions

Comments

  1. R. Bishop says

    August 8, 2023 at 6:01 pm

    enjoyed the ending – good wok

    Reply
  2. Paul Scott Wood says

    August 9, 2023 at 9:46 am

    You captured well the life of a drug addict or alcoholic. Nicely done.

    Reply
  3. Toni Brayer says

    August 9, 2023 at 11:30 am

    Sad but real. Well done!

    Reply
  4. maria warner says

    August 9, 2023 at 12:39 pm

    Really captured the manipulation. Great job!

    Reply
  5. Pamela Cartlidge says

    August 9, 2023 at 2:03 pm

    Well done!

    Reply
  6. Trenton Pomeroy says

    August 9, 2023 at 4:05 pm

    Great story, and feels so true. Well done.

    Reply
  7. Bud says

    August 10, 2023 at 9:52 am

    An all too frequent story, very well told.

    Reply

Leave a Reply Cancel reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

Primary Sidebar

Search Stories

The end.