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She Waited

June 27, 2024 4 Comments

By Christine Rains

She waited for him in spring’s full bloom. He, once a sun-kissed boy, now a thoughtful young man. He threw flowers into the lake to celebrate her beauty.

While it rained, she waited. He returned in the sweet heat of summer. His joyful laughter made ripples on the water’s surface.

Leaves fell and he went to school abroad, but with the first snow, they built snowmen and shared their secret feelings.

She didn’t retreat to the depths of her lake when winter took hold. He didn’t come for weeks. Still, she waited, even when the ice encased her near the shore.

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  1. Bud says

    July 3, 2024 at 8:23 am

    Nice story. The poetic overtone gives it a Lady of the Lake mystical quality.

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  2. Catherine Stine says

    July 3, 2024 at 10:26 am

    Spooky and lyrical.

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  3. MARY PAX-SHIPLEY says

    July 3, 2024 at 9:00 pm

    Beautiful, and I love the mood.

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  4. Patricia JL says

    July 3, 2024 at 10:58 pm

    Great story. The ending is perfectly sad.

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