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Smokin’-Hot Mama

July 25, 2024 12 Comments

By Alexandra Ely

The sound of the smoke alarm dances on my eardrums. Adrenaline springs me from bed. The clock says 8:00 a.m.

I tuck the cat under my arm, grab my phone, and trip over the sheets reaching for the door. Flying down the stairs, I yell, “Fire!”

A smoky haze hovers between the floor and ceiling. I run out the back door and step on something hot and crispy.

“Bacon?”

She tossed the bacon? My fight or flight lessens and I peek my head into the kitchen. The windows are open and the fan is blowing.

Yep, Mom’s trying to cook again.

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  1. Dart humeston says

    July 25, 2024 at 6:49 am

    Good story. Enjoyed it, especially grabbing the cat to safe him.

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    • Alexandra Ely says

      July 25, 2024 at 2:09 pm

      Thank you. Always gotta same the cat. ?

      Reply
  2. Lisa says

    July 25, 2024 at 10:58 am

    Your writing had me visually there the whole time in suspense and then the giggle and relief when it was Mom’s fault for the fire!

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    • Alexandra Ely says

      July 25, 2024 at 2:09 pm

      Thank you!

      Reply
  3. Makayla says

    July 25, 2024 at 11:46 am

    This reminds me of growing up with my own mom!

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    • Alexandra Ely says

      July 25, 2024 at 2:10 pm

      Haha, this may or may not be inspired by true events. 😉

      Reply
  4. Dan Graves says

    July 31, 2024 at 7:18 am

    loved the title

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    • Alexandra Ely says

      August 2, 2024 at 3:16 pm

      Thanks! Thinking of the title was one of the harder parts. Haha

      Reply
  5. RC says

    July 31, 2024 at 7:20 pm

    “Dances on my eardrums” is a great metaphor; it really stood out to me.

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    • Alexandra Ely says

      August 2, 2024 at 3:14 pm

      Thank you for letting me know. 🙂

      Reply
  6. Charlotte Bennardo says

    August 5, 2024 at 11:33 am

    Ha Ha, whenever I had a minor kitchen mishap (usually something spilled in the oven or it was dirty), and the smoke alarms went off, my sons and hubs would yell from wherever they were, “Mama’s cooking!”

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    • Alexandra Ely says

      August 14, 2024 at 5:51 pm

      Haha, yes! 😉

      Reply

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