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The First Contact

October 27, 2018 5 Comments

The First Contact

By Martin Lochman

Astronaut Piotr Krawinski fights to suppress a yawn. He sits across from the representative of the first discovered alien civilization. The being had been rambling on for hours and Piotr could use a break.

He checks his watch for the umpteenth time just as the alien says: “…we are impressed by how far you’ve come. You are our perfect creations.”

Piotr straightens. “You created us?”

“Indeed, we did.”

“Why? Are we your experiment? Pets? Exhibits in a theme park?” Piotr’s mind races.

The alien falls silent for a moment.

“Because the Universe is empty and we didn’t want to be alone.”

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  1. Meghashri says

    October 27, 2018 at 9:42 am

    Cool!

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  2. b. says

    October 27, 2018 at 12:42 pm

    Awww yes, the monsters that loneliness can create… Great thought and good writing to express your idea.

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  3. Brian says

    October 27, 2018 at 5:30 pm

    Great story!

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  4. Susan says

    October 27, 2018 at 6:52 pm

    Aww. That was really sweet.

    Reply
  5. taekwondocathy says

    October 29, 2018 at 2:37 pm

    Well done, Martin.

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