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The Time Had Come

April 12, 2022 10 Comments

By Christie Cartolano

The time had come. She knew it. He knew it. They could wait no longer.

The tension in the air hung heavy like a dark menacing cloud.

Being older, he needed help so she picked him up. As she carried him, there was quiet. She was torn over what had to be done. The needed items were waiting in the room.

As she set him down he squirmed, but there was nowhere for him to go. He stared with one last plea in his eyes hoping for sympathy.

She stared back and in a calming voice said, โ€œSorry, buddy. Bath time.โ€

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  1. Helen C says

    April 12, 2022 at 7:09 am

    Loved it. It reminded me of my dog and bath time.

    Reply
    • Christie C says

      April 12, 2022 at 11:47 pm

      Aw thank you Helen! Furbabies unite!

      Reply
  2. Meghashri Dalvi says

    April 12, 2022 at 9:07 am

    Wonderful!

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    • Christie C says

      April 12, 2022 at 11:47 pm

      Thank you so much! ๐Ÿ™‚

      Reply
  3. Dave says

    April 12, 2022 at 11:26 am

    Love it; love the twist!

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    • Christie C says

      April 12, 2022 at 11:48 pm

      Thank you! Gotta keep you on your toes!! ๐Ÿ™‚

      Reply
  4. Shilpa says

    April 13, 2022 at 7:28 am

    I knew there would be a fur baby in this story! Reminded me of mine ?? Beautifully done!

    Reply
    • Christie C says

      April 13, 2022 at 10:51 am

      Oh my, thank you so much! They really are inspirations for a lot, arenโ€™t they? ๐Ÿ™‚

      Reply
  5. Alan Moskowitz says

    April 13, 2022 at 12:19 pm

    I actually felt relief. Nicely done.

    Reply
    • Christie C says

      April 13, 2022 at 7:15 pm

      Alan, thank you for this. This is exactly what I was going for. Means a lot that you felt it. Thank you so much for reading.

      Reply

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