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The Train Ride

March 21, 2016 5 Comments

The Train Ride

By Leela Bear

The landscape is barren. The train speeds through it.

I am headed to the megalopolis for an interview. Television screens in the cabin distract the passengers from an overwhelming immediate reality beyond their windows.

No one can remember when the conditioning started, but it was effective. Slowly the plants disappeared into tunnel farms, and beasts into confined feeding lots. Steaks moved into the labs to be grown in petri dishes, and nobody seems to remember the sound of the wind through the trees.

I wake up with my stop nearing. Everything is a familiar past; the screens have become commonplace already.

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  1. Scott Merrow says

    March 21, 2016 at 9:13 am

    What a bleak world. Poignant because at times it feels like that’s the way we’re headed.

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  2. Bobby Warner says

    March 21, 2016 at 9:25 am

    Modern civilization with all its distractions from Nature does take its toll. Like Scott, above, I fear this is where we are headed. Perhaps there will be a very real good side to all this, too. Anyway, I liked this one.

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  3. azsalinas23 says

    March 21, 2016 at 12:39 pm

    Funny how trains are now a symbol of our crumbling industrial past. Dig this story.

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  4. Barry O'Farrell says

    March 21, 2016 at 4:12 pm

    This has got an eerily real feel to it. Well done.

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  5. Leela Bear says

    April 10, 2016 at 6:50 pm

    Thanks to you all for your great feedback!

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