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January 26, 2018 3 Comments

The Visitors
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He was about to lay on the horn when he saw the flashing lights. He craned his neck. Probably some drunk got in a fender bender.

The driver side door of the beater three cars ahead opened. A man jumped out and ran past, eyes wild. Maybe he has a stash in the car.

He opened his own door, stepped out as casually as possible and started ambling toward the abandoned beater. He actually took half a dozen steps before his mind registered what he was seeing. Oh, no. Oh, please.

He turned and started running as fast as he could.

By Katelyn Thomas

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  1. Glenn Bowman says

    January 26, 2018 at 9:05 am

    Great story, Katelyn. Sometime, we don’t want to know.

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  2. julianasunblog says

    January 26, 2018 at 1:18 pm

    The story made me think of a Hitchcock movie. Suspense and mystery, one of my favorite combination. Great story-telling.

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  3. rachelnewcombe8 says

    February 2, 2018 at 1:19 pm

    LOVE the pacing and urged mysterious

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