Tim parked his new economy car by his office. He would rather have a sports car, but he did not want to draw attention to himself with an expensive car. Not until he’d finished embezzling two million dollars, and skipped town. His car was dull, but unnoticeable.
Meanwhile, Stacy, his boss, was thinking. Tim’s new car was totally out of character. Was something wrong with him? If so, was his job performance acceptable? She’d better review his work. Just in case.
Tim entered his office. He was blissfully unaware that his embezzling would soon be discovered, thanks to his “unnoticeable” car.
Good story, but what’s a noticeable vehicle?
Nah! Doesn’t track logically. Plus a “new” economy car suggests he had an old one which would set up a custom.