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58 Seconds

October 25, 2022 12 Comments

By David Sydney

—Well, that’s it, sports fans! A knockout, 58 seconds into the first round. Before I interview the Champ, let’s see if I can make my way there, see how the challenger saw the fight. Otto? Can you hear me?

—Whaa?

—Otto, does 58 seconds set a record for you as it does for the Champ?

—Huh?

—Was it the left hook or the right cross that did the damage? Can you remember?

—Left?

—Or, right?

—Right?

—Right, Otto. Or didn’t you see the punch?

—Punch? What punch?

—Well, thanks, Otto. We just wanted to get your take on the fight.

—What?

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Comments

  1. Chieh says

    October 25, 2022 at 5:49 am

    This is real funny, giving me a good laugh. Poor guy, what a concussion.

    Reply
    • David Sydney says

      October 25, 2022 at 10:42 pm

      Thank you. It’s no fun to lose.

      Reply
  2. DErek says

    October 25, 2022 at 7:05 am

    If boxing is a sport, it is not particularly sporting. Good story.

    Reply
    • David Sydney says

      October 25, 2022 at 10:45 pm

      Thank you. A lot of people try to get around Marquis of Queensbury rules.

      Reply
  3. Valli Henry-Boldini says

    October 26, 2022 at 4:49 am

    That made me smile… kudos…

    Reply
  4. Joanie says

    October 26, 2022 at 11:16 am

    was hard not to smile…

    Reply
  5. Carolyn O'Brien says

    October 26, 2022 at 3:59 pm

    I interpret this as showing the intrusive and heartless media, it’s deep.

    Reply
  6. Jennifer J. says

    October 26, 2022 at 5:14 pm

    It’s funny, yet leaves me feeling sad at the same time. Nice writing.

    Reply
  7. Anna Hallett says

    October 26, 2022 at 8:04 pm

    Very clever! And, sadly, too true. I really enjoyed your story.

    Reply
  8. Yogita says

    October 27, 2022 at 2:35 am

    Ha ha, well done

    Reply
  9. DAVID HIGHAM says

    October 27, 2022 at 5:42 am

    Brilliant, all done with dialogue and what wonderful use of words.

    Reply
  10. Jean Barbaro says

    November 2, 2022 at 6:18 pm

    I actually didn’t find it funny, but very well-written on a topic that’s viewed from so many varied perspectives, as reflected in the comments.

    Excellent job.

    Reply

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