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A Closed Book

October 14, 2022 43 Comments

By Laura Besley

In a small seaside town, I stop outside a bookshop. Through the window, one catches my eye: it’s jay-bird blue and has your name on it.

Later, while my husband sleeps off the beers from lunch, I go back. I pick up the book, read the author information. There’s no photo, but I don’t doubt it’s you.

“Those are signed copies,” the bookseller says. “Would you like one?”

“My husband says I have too many books already.”

I don’t read the dedication before returning it to the display. I’m too afraid the words are meant for me. Too afraid they aren’t.

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Comments

  1. Lesley Bungay says

    October 14, 2022 at 3:12 am

    Oh that last line – heartbreaking.

    Reply
    • Laura Besley says

      October 14, 2022 at 8:17 am

      Thank you, Lesley!

      Reply
  2. David says

    October 14, 2022 at 3:27 am

    Amazing to achieve so much depth of story in just 101 words.

    Reply
    • Laura Besley says

      October 14, 2022 at 8:17 am

      Thank you, David! That’s very kind of you to say.

      Reply
  3. Albert Katz says

    October 14, 2022 at 7:14 am

    Wonderful. A full story with depth and emotion.

    Reply
    • Laura Besley says

      October 14, 2022 at 8:17 am

      Thanks, Albert!

      Reply
  4. Scott says

    October 14, 2022 at 7:30 am

    I agree with David. What a gem.

    Congratulations!

    Reply
    • Laura Besley says

      October 14, 2022 at 8:18 am

      Thanks very much, Scott!

      Reply
  5. Joan Reed says

    October 14, 2022 at 8:08 am

    Beautiful!

    Reply
    • Laura Besley says

      October 14, 2022 at 8:18 am

      Thank you, Joan!

      Reply
  6. Kevin says

    October 14, 2022 at 8:18 am

    Best flash fiction I’ve read in a long time. Kudos.

    Reply
    • Laura Besley says

      October 14, 2022 at 9:30 am

      Wow! Thank you, Kevin!

      Reply
  7. Nan says

    October 14, 2022 at 8:38 am

    My heart felt this.

    Reply
    • Laura Besley says

      October 16, 2022 at 5:34 am

      Thank you!

      Reply
  8. Chris Nedahl says

    October 14, 2022 at 9:10 am

    Sadly beautiful, Laura. Such a poignant last line. A big story in so few words. xx

    Reply
    • Laura Besley says

      October 15, 2022 at 3:42 pm

      Thank you, Christine! xx

      Reply
  9. Shoshauna says

    October 14, 2022 at 10:08 am

    The simplicity in this one has an eloquence that will stay with me. Thank you, Laura!

    Reply
    • Laura Besley says

      October 15, 2022 at 3:43 pm

      Thank you so much!

      Reply
  10. Meghashri Dalvi says

    October 14, 2022 at 10:20 am

    So beautiful! Loved it!

    Reply
    • Laura Besley says

      October 15, 2022 at 3:43 pm

      Thank you!

      Reply
  11. Lisa says

    October 14, 2022 at 10:28 am

    Depth and poignancy in just a few words, you should be so proud of yourself!

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    • Laura Besley says

      October 15, 2022 at 3:43 pm

      Thank you, Lisa!

      Reply
  12. Greta says

    October 14, 2022 at 11:04 am

    I really like this one – so much said and unsaid. So emotional.

    Reply
    • Laura Besley says

      October 15, 2022 at 3:44 pm

      Thank you, Greta!

      Reply
  13. Howard Dart Humeston says

    October 14, 2022 at 11:20 am

    Well written with full meaning. Great story. Got to say it again, great story.

    Reply
    • Laura Besley says

      October 15, 2022 at 3:44 pm

      Thank you! Thank you!

      Reply
  14. Valli Henry-Boldini says

    October 14, 2022 at 11:21 am

    Great read… kudos…

    Reply
    • Laura Besley says

      October 15, 2022 at 3:44 pm

      Thanks a lot!

      Reply
  15. Sharon says

    October 14, 2022 at 11:47 am

    Such simplicity that tells the story wonderfully
    Masterful.

    Reply
    • Laura Besley says

      October 15, 2022 at 3:44 pm

      Thank you, Sharon!

      Reply
  16. Michael Brown says

    October 14, 2022 at 6:16 pm

    Sometimes it’s right on the money. This one is.

    Reply
    • Laura Besley says

      October 15, 2022 at 3:45 pm

      Thanks, Michael. So good to hear!

      Reply
  17. Angie says

    October 14, 2022 at 6:26 pm

    Best story for ages. Really felt the last line.

    Reply
    • Laura Besley says

      October 15, 2022 at 3:45 pm

      Thanks, Angie! Appreciate you saying that.

      Reply
  18. Jerry Jerman says

    October 14, 2022 at 11:24 pm

    The direct address to the book’s author is particularly affecting. Nice touch and well written.

    Reply
    • Laura Besley says

      October 15, 2022 at 3:45 pm

      Thank you, Jerry!

      Reply
  19. JHJones says

    October 15, 2022 at 7:06 am

    Love this! Simple and poignant. Awesome!

    Reply
    • Laura Besley says

      October 15, 2022 at 3:46 pm

      Thank you!

      Reply
  20. Jennifer J. says

    October 18, 2022 at 7:52 pm

    I love this story. The last line gives the reader so much to think about.

    Reply
  21. Joanie says

    October 19, 2022 at 8:30 am

    A whole world in 101 words! Well done!

    Reply
  22. Chetana Vaishnavi says

    October 19, 2022 at 9:09 am

    Nice one. A completely new one

    Reply
  23. Doug Jacquier says

    October 19, 2022 at 2:07 pm

    Evocative and complete in 101 words. A rare treat. Well done.

    Reply
  24. Andrei Sisman says

    December 19, 2022 at 1:24 pm

    Quite beautiful stuff, Laura. The vibezz are real and the whole thing’s jam-packed with emotion. Congrats!

    Reply

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