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A Familiar Story

June 13, 2016 9 Comments

A Familiar Story

By Prospero Dae

Eve was a hat-check girl and Adam was a zoologist.

One night, Adam had a thirst. He stopped at a club. There he met Eve. She smiled and took his coat. Later she swiped from his coat pocket a pair of snakeskin gloves.

On the dance floor a faulty disco ball nearly landed on Adam’s head. Time to go home.

That’s when he realized he’d been robbed; it had to be Eve.

“Why did you rob me?” asked Adam, gazing askance at Eve’s generous cleavage and then into her prismatic eyes.

“Temptation.”

“Sweet Jesus!” exclaimed Adam.

“I’m off at midnight.”

“Spiff.”

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  1. Bruce Goodman says

    June 13, 2016 at 10:34 am

    My favourite detail is the zoologist thing.

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  2. Bobby Warner says

    June 13, 2016 at 11:38 am

    Great story, Prospero. You never fail to entertain. The mark of a good writer.

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  3. Jazz says

    June 13, 2016 at 12:02 pm

    …………….and the rest is History

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  4. Sarkis Antikajian says

    June 13, 2016 at 12:30 pm

    Enjoyable.

    Reply
  5. Smila W. Planete says

    June 13, 2016 at 1:25 pm

    very entertaining Adam and Eve tale!

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  6. jeffswitt says

    June 14, 2016 at 5:57 am

    This is a really clever, well written tale.

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  7. Cynthia Jobin says

    June 14, 2016 at 3:53 pm

    Lovely take on the perennial story, though in an era when no one wears hats anymore, the snakeskin gloves will have to do.

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  8. Rob McShane says

    June 15, 2016 at 1:57 am

    Yes…love it!

    Reply
  9. Stickup Artist says

    June 15, 2016 at 8:59 pm

    Artfully done!

    Reply

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