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A Feeling Deep Within

March 11, 2015 5 Comments

A Feeling Deep Within by Naomi Genosa
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After the party, I felt the urge to drop by her room seeking for pleasure.

Her perfect body clothed with nakedness welcomed me. Touching her skin gave me chills.

Suddenly, an ineffable feeling deep within me awakens. My heart rapidly pounding. I can’t contain it anymore!

I took off my pants, followed by my trousers. My half-naked body didn’t bother her. She just stood there, and smirked.

Without her permission, I sat on top of her. Still, no words came out her mouth. I began to push slowly. “Almost there. Ahhhh…” I groan.

“Ploop!” Came out my poop.

“Damn those oysters!”

By Naomi Genosa

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  1. Clay Fulghum says

    March 11, 2015 at 12:34 pm

    This is over the top for me. Why bother writing such a thing? What did the writer hope to accomplish? A feeling of disgust in the reader? If so, that was accomplished.

    Reply
    • Yours says

      March 12, 2015 at 6:29 pm

      So why did you bother reading it?

      Reply
      • Critic says

        March 13, 2015 at 5:07 pm

        Because he expected a good conclusion, don’t be stupid.

        Reply
    • Shane says

      March 12, 2015 at 11:23 pm

      Then dont read it!!!!!

      Reply
  2. nottoohandsome says

    March 13, 2015 at 8:04 am

    I did not see that coming.

    Reply

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