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A Fictional World

August 23, 2017 5 Comments

A Fictional World

By Lisa M. Scuderi-Burkimsher

Lily sat by the fireplace sipping tea. She opened her book ready to step into the Renaissance era, where a knight and peasant girl yearned for each other. As she started reading, she petted her Shih-Tzu Lucky’s stomach and indulged in the novel’s romance and chivalry. Just as she was about to finish the first chapter, the phone rang.

“I wonder who that could be?”

“Miss Stone, this is Dr. Smith.”

“Is it bad news?”

“The cancer has spread to your liver and spine. We need to start treatment immediately.”

Lily hung up the phone and returned to her fictional world.

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  1. Roy Dorman says

    August 23, 2017 at 9:30 am

    Nicely done, Lisa.

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  2. Bobby Warner says

    August 23, 2017 at 10:55 am

    Great surprise ending! Great job!

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  3. Ariffa says

    August 23, 2017 at 11:29 am

    Very well done, Lisa!

    Reply
  4. Max Puber says

    August 23, 2017 at 4:36 pm

    Lisa, your story draws me into questioning reality and how our thoughts shape it. Undoubtable your intention was to draw me into this journey. Dare I hope we have purchase round trip tickets? A deliciously dangerous story. Kudos! – Max

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  5. Anita Bodle says

    August 27, 2017 at 11:43 am

    Very touching.

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