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A Lousy Goodbye

January 31, 2016 2 Comments

A Lousy Goodbye

By John Carpenter

She screamed, watching the sailboat motor from the harbor. He didn’t look back.

The engine. He can’t hear me.

She’d known it was over when the bed was empty that morning. Did he know her plans? How?

Silence on the water. She looked up. He stood, one arm holding a middle finger aloft, like a torch.

She dug her toes into the sand and aimed the pistol. He jumped down into the cockpit. Then she noticed his shirt at her feet, and the Gideon Bible she gave him.

Dropping her arm, she blasted a hole through the book’s worn leather cover.

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    January 31, 2016 at 12:39 pm

    The ending is great, John. Such a spurned human thing to do!

    Reply
  2. Mik Augustin says

    June 1, 2026 at 10:05 am

    Brilliant! “Did he know her plans?”
    Flash fiction is a tricky genre. You
    clearly nailed it. Nice work, as
    always.

    Reply

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