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A Single Thing

June 13, 2023 3 Comments

By Tom Hazuka

I don’t remember what the Japanese exchange student did, just what she said about it when my girlfriend told her how brave she was: “Not brave, just reckless.” Midori’s English was basic and her accent thick, but I never forgot those words and her sunny smile when she spoke them.

It’s been twenty years since I last saw that girlfriend, both of us relieved when I boarded the train west. I waved from the window and we never talked again.

So why does it hurt tonight that I can’t recall a single thing she ever said to me with a smile?

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  1. Valli Boldini says

    June 14, 2023 at 5:25 pm

    Kudos…

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  2. David Higham says

    June 15, 2023 at 1:25 pm

    I needed to read this story a couple of times before I really got it. I like the way you evoke the melancholy of a lost love.

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  3. Sandra says

    June 23, 2023 at 8:30 pm

    Going forward, for the best. Thank you!

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