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A Turquoise Fish

December 17, 2014 2 Comments

A Turquoise Fish by Addy Evenson

By Addy Evenson

When the brown moths would gather on the ceiling, you would take them up in your hands and set them loose outside. Yes, I miss that.

And you are right. It is true that I was vengeful. It is true that I was impossible to pin to the carpet. And I used rhetoric to slip out of body. But what you wouldn’t hear, what I tried to tell you, was that I felt like a fish on the shore, begging for water. Love me, please, hear me, please, see? You kept telling me, “The sand is water, so swim in it.”

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  1. clayfulghum says

    December 19, 2014 at 11:15 am

    Prototypical dilemma of lovers, beautifully expressed.

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    • addyevenson says

      December 28, 2014 at 10:36 pm

      Thank you. –Addy Evenson

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