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A Wide, Wide Sea

November 11, 2016 6 Comments

A Wide, Wide Sea

By Gerald Kamens

In this Italian abbey overlooking the Mediterranean, I’ve stopped searching for a human lover and instead seek divine union. Brides of Christ, we wear gold wedding rings. Most sisters say they’ve found that miraculous merger. I haven’t, yet.

I sometimes recall other waters, an ocean a world away. Many summers ago, decades before the gambling palaces, my family drove to Atlantic City. On a long pier jutting over that ocean, a horse and its female rider would, thrice daily, ascend a tower, dive down sixty feet into a small water tank, and emerge, miraculously, unscathed. Theirs, too, were leaps of faith.

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  1. M.C. Neuda says

    November 11, 2016 at 9:14 am

    There’s something quite beautiful about this story. I can’t put my finger on what so speaks to me. All that comes to mind is that it’s like a vibrating string.

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  2. Derek says

    November 11, 2016 at 9:23 am

    Beautiful, beautiful work.

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  3. Bobby Warner says

    November 11, 2016 at 3:15 pm

    Simply exquisite!

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  4. Jerry Kamens says

    November 11, 2016 at 6:18 pm

    Thanks, y’all. Jerry

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  5. avalinakreska says

    November 11, 2016 at 10:07 pm

    Ethereal, my kind of flash.

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  6. John La Briola says

    November 15, 2016 at 11:19 pm

    Excellent piece.

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