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Accident Prone

September 15, 2022 32 Comments

By Melissa Jornd

Just an accident, my mother tells the doctor wrapping my arm in a cast. You know kids. He smiles and draws a happy face when he’s done.

Just an accident, I tell the counselors when they question the injuries. I’m quite clumsy.

Just an accident, I parrot repeatedly, like my mother taught me. She reminds me it’s my fault I need to be punished, and I believe her.

For a while.

Just an accident, the cops say when they show up at our house. Faulty brakes, icy road. I nod solemnly and close the door.

My smile is not an accident.

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Comments

  1. Derek says

    September 15, 2022 at 7:04 am

    Revenge is sweet!

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    • Melissa says

      September 15, 2022 at 11:41 am

      Absolutely. Thank you for reading!

      Reply
  2. Coco says

    September 15, 2022 at 8:49 am

    Almost creepy, yet we all know that desire.

    Nicely done!

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    • Melissa says

      September 15, 2022 at 11:40 am

      Thank you so much!

      Reply
  3. lee says

    September 15, 2022 at 11:31 am

    well executed story 🙂

    Reply
    • Melissa says

      September 15, 2022 at 11:39 am

      Thank you so much!

      Reply
  4. Lisa says

    September 15, 2022 at 4:11 pm

    A brilliant story Melissa, well done!

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    • Melissa says

      September 15, 2022 at 8:31 pm

      Thank you Lisa!

      Reply
  5. Tom Baldwin says

    September 15, 2022 at 8:47 pm

    I smiled, too!

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    • Melissa says

      September 16, 2022 at 12:36 am

      A little hard not to root for her, right? Thank you for the read and the comment!

      Reply
  6. Mary says

    September 16, 2022 at 10:37 am

    Excellent! I can see the victorious revenge in her smile in that last sentence. Great job.

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    • Melissa says

      September 16, 2022 at 6:45 pm

      Thank you for the kind words!

      Reply
  7. Raymond Sloan says

    September 16, 2022 at 2:59 pm

    Great story, Melissa!

    Reply
    • Melissa says

      September 16, 2022 at 6:46 pm

      Thank you!

      Reply
  8. Joyce Jacobo says

    September 18, 2022 at 10:18 pm

    Powerful. Sometimes the universe dishes out its own type of justice.

    Reply
    • Melissa says

      September 19, 2022 at 1:24 pm

      Sometimes it’s the universe, and sometimes we have to nudge it to do what we want 🙂 thank you for reading!

      Reply
  9. Valli Henry-Boldini says

    September 19, 2022 at 12:33 pm

    Great read… Karma has its way of repaying… kudos…

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    • Melissa says

      September 19, 2022 at 1:25 pm

      Thank you so much!

      Reply
  10. Laurel McHargue says

    September 21, 2022 at 10:14 am

    Yup! It had to happen! Great use of repetition to ramp up our eagerness to see what the next ‘accident’ will be!

    Reply
    • Melissa says

      September 21, 2022 at 3:41 pm

      Thank you!

      Reply
  11. Steve Bailey says

    September 21, 2022 at 10:56 am

    Well done!

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    • Melissa says

      September 21, 2022 at 3:41 pm

      Thanks so much!

      Reply
  12. Jerry Jerman says

    September 21, 2022 at 12:43 pm

    I really like the play on the word “accident” and all that word suggests. This is nicely done.

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    • Melissa says

      September 21, 2022 at 3:41 pm

      I appreciate the comment, thank you!

      Reply
  13. Christine says

    September 21, 2022 at 1:15 pm

    Very clever. Loved it

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    • Melissa says

      September 21, 2022 at 3:42 pm

      Thank you 🙂

      Reply
  14. Liz says

    September 21, 2022 at 6:16 pm

    What goes round, comes round – but not usually as satisfyingly as this. Well done.

    Reply
    • Melissa says

      September 23, 2022 at 9:31 pm

      If only sometimes, right? Thank you for reading!

      Reply
  15. Pamela Cartlidge says

    September 23, 2022 at 8:11 am

    Loved it! Well done.

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    • Melissa says

      September 23, 2022 at 9:31 pm

      Thank you so much!

      Reply
  16. James R Coffey says

    September 24, 2022 at 9:16 am

    Nicely dark!

    Reply
  17. Thom says

    September 28, 2022 at 5:40 pm

    Nicely done.

    Reply

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