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Across a Distance

January 3, 2017 7 Comments

Across a Distance

By Ken McGrath

There’s an elderly Indian man who sits each day on the bench by the edge of our park. He’s been there for years, growing older. We watch him sometimes from the swings and slides. The bigger kids, the ones who smoke, call him names and say nasty things. But he never looks over, just sits quietly staring at the trees.

Mum says he’s harmless but warns us to stay away. She says he lost someone.

Sometimes, when it rains, I see him holding his hands out and then blue sparks dance on his fingertips. When this happens, it looks like love.

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    January 3, 2017 at 8:49 am

    Gives you a warm and chilly feeling both at the same time. Pleasingly mysterious!

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  2. Judith Kelly Quaempts says

    January 3, 2017 at 10:05 am

    I really liked this one-i wonder if the author writes poetry, too.

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  3. James Freeze says

    January 3, 2017 at 10:11 am

    Excellent story with lots of depth.—

    Reply
  4. Wolfe says

    January 3, 2017 at 12:09 pm

    Good images.

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  5. S. J. Fields says

    January 3, 2017 at 3:47 pm

    Beautiful, enchanted mystery. Thank you.

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  6. Dante Murray says

    January 3, 2017 at 3:59 pm

    Beautiful. Well crafted magic.

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  7. Claire says

    January 4, 2017 at 2:29 am

    Strange but beautiful. I’m not sure about it looking like love but the narration is lovely 🙂

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