By Ray Calder
We moved through the days like swimmers in different lanes, each with a private logic for staying afloat. I surfaced, gasping for air, wanting you; you dove for the hush at the bottom. The Relationship Compliance App blinked: “Submit Affection Receipts.” The kitchen meter chirped, “Distance Detected. Please Schedule a Reconnection Audit.” Your silences were your shelter. My talking, a kind of trespass. I made rules; you dissolved them. The fridge displayed Our Intimacy Score. The light stuttered, the app pinged, and we obeyed in silence. I needed nearness; you needed separation. The paperwork piled up. We sank, pending deletion, together.
Wonderful words that speak volumes about the relationship
“Like swimmers in different lanes…..your silences were your shelter”
Very poetic description a wonderful poem could emerge through them.
I agree with Mary. This is a wonderful piece about a couple breaking apart because they want different things, swim in different lanes. Very moving.