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After the Funeral

January 9, 2025 3 Comments

By Menke HB

“Angie Marie Barton!” Dad gestures at the shattered glass. “You are so grounded!”

Standing with one hand in my skirt pocket, I stare at his tattered loafers. My thumb finds a piece of gum, and I move my tongue against my teeth as if blowing a bubble. Her kisses smelled of spearmint.

“Look me in the eyes!” he barks.

“I didn’t mean to break Mom’s picture!” My voice is a whisper. “I just wanted to touch her.”

His stubby fingers gently brush the shards from her windswept hair. “Take it.”

I clutch her as Dad’s bedroom door falls shut once more.

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  1. jaxson-dan says

    January 14, 2025 at 2:03 am

    I so like the way the dad grew tender at the end.

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  2. Sue D says

    January 15, 2025 at 8:41 am

    Shared grief that is not able to be shared.

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  3. Janet says

    January 15, 2025 at 9:06 am

    Heartbreaking – on so many levels

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