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Aliens

June 23, 2015 4 Comments

Aliens

By Clay Fulghum

Milesy and Katrul had been talking. “Dad, we want one of the new two-legged animals for a pet. Please, please!”

“What?” Xymul exclaimed. “They’re barely better than bots, just automata that can’t feel.”

“No!” the kids protested. “They bleed and scream and cry! We see them in the fields”

“Now kids, don’t think I’m not grateful for them. They’re tasty, especially when cooked rare. And very useful in our research labs—by the millions. In fact, it was the best thing we ever did, conquering that pale blue dot we see in the night sky, that little planet called the Earth.”

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  1. Pattyann McCarthy says

    June 23, 2015 at 11:07 am

    LOVE! Very creative Clay. Great story and loved the ending. 🙂

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    • clayfulghum says

      July 10, 2015 at 12:50 pm

      Thank you, Pattyann. But actually, I think my role reversal idea didn’t quite work. I was trying to suggest how it might feel to be treated as we treat our animals!

      Reply
  2. Emily Clayton says

    June 23, 2015 at 4:41 pm

    “They bleed and scream and cry!” Why do I like that line so much? Loved the story!

    Reply
  3. JR Hampton says

    June 25, 2015 at 9:33 am

    Great story.

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