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Animal Instincts

June 4, 2026 4 Comments

By Thomas Williams

I catch my breath as I lock eyes on them in the clearing, the dappled sunlight illuminating the doe’s feathery white tail. I take a moment to marvel before tapping my daughter’s arm and gesturing silently in their direction.

Then it hits me. The scene mirrors us. The doe, watchful and twitchy, protective, tense, scanning the surroundings warily, eyes darting to and from her kin as the younger creature pulls noisily and carelessly at the leaves of a mulberry tree. I smile at its innocent naivety and look towards my daughter. Her breathing has slowed as she draws up the rifle.

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  1. Sarah A Flick says

    June 4, 2026 at 10:28 am

    Good twist on the ending.

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  2. Toni Brayer says

    June 10, 2026 at 12:07 pm

    Shooting a doe? Evil

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  3. Pamela Cartlidge says

    June 12, 2026 at 2:08 pm

    Horrific.

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  4. Pamela Cartlidge says

    June 12, 2026 at 2:09 pm

    Did not like the content of this. No matter how well it is written. The reader is tricked and so is the animal. Horrible.

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