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Anna’s Secret

June 21, 2017 11 Comments

Anna’s Secret

By Susan Gale Wickes

She never carried herself properly. “Stand up straight, Anna,” her mother chided. “Smile like you’ve got a secret, girl.”

Her mother was tall, regal. But Anna was always bent over a book. “You’ll never find what you’re looking for in there, child. They’re just words.”

Anna looked out onto the garden. Her mother’s favorite yellow tulips waved in the gentle morning breeze. So tall, so regal. Anna placed the garden snips in the pocket of her jacket. “They’re just flowers,” she thought to herself.

The first tulip fell silently to the ground.

“Smile like you’ve got a secret, girl,” Anna whispered.

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Comments

  1. Lesley Mace says

    June 21, 2017 at 5:51 am

    This story made me smile!! Thank you for writing it. 🙂

    Reply
    • Susan says

      June 21, 2017 at 5:57 am

      You’re welcome. I’m glad you enjoyed it, Lesley!

      Reply
  2. Bobby Warner says

    June 21, 2017 at 8:09 am

    More left unsaid than said in this story, which is the way I like “em. I’m thinking that Anna’s secret is going to turn out to be very wicked, indeed!

    Reply
    • Susan says

      June 21, 2017 at 11:47 am

      Thanks, Bobby. I like an air of mystery too…and it certainly didn’t end well for the tulips. 🙂

      Reply
  3. Jake says

    June 21, 2017 at 9:17 am

    Haven’t we all had such a wicked streak? This story was fun to read. I think most of us are still working out what happened after the story finished.

    Reply
    • Susan says

      June 21, 2017 at 11:52 am

      Thanks, Jake. I had fun writing it too. I hope that doesn’t mean I have a wicked streak…

      Reply
      • Jake says

        June 22, 2017 at 4:44 am

        I think we both know you do, Susan 😉

        Reply
  4. Dante Murray says

    June 21, 2017 at 5:31 pm

    I love this 101. It got me interested in the imagination of its author.

    Reply
    • Susan says

      June 21, 2017 at 6:43 pm

      Thank you. I must admit, I’m still working on the imagination aspect of writing…when to let it run wild and when to rein it in.

      Reply
  5. rachelnewcombe8 says

    June 26, 2017 at 6:09 am

    The flow of this micro — I love it. Intense and vivid.

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    • Susan says

      June 26, 2017 at 11:46 am

      Thanks. I’m glad you enjoyed reading this story.

      Reply

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