By Jan Allen
When we were kids, I would scream at my brother, “Crybaby!” Or sometimes, “Dork!”
Jack would scream back, “You’re adopted!” His insult continued into adulthood.
After Dad died, Mom’s heart ballooned. I moved in, cared for her for eight years; she found fault. Jack visited twice a year; she found a sense of humor.
Mom left everything to Jack—the house and $50,000.
I meet my brother for lunch sometimes. He always brings up Mom’s will. “I guess I said you were adopted so often, Mom started to believe it.”
We eat wherever Jack chooses, always some greasy spoon. He treats.
A lot of story compressed into 101 words. Well done. I like how you’ve conveyed the complexities of the family relationships in so few words.