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Apart

November 14, 2019 8 Comments

Apart

By Angie Dent

He pressed send. The photo of his disastrous chicken risotto zoomed into cyberspace. ‘Not sure even you’d eat this!’ he added, plus two laughing emojis.

The next morning he cautiously checked again. No reply. He sent a good morning GIF of a cute kitten and the usual ‘Love you’ and purple heart.

After a busy day back at work, he checked again. Nothing. Messaging ‘Miss you xx,’ he set off for his first appointment.

Awkwardly perched on the grief counselor’s hard leather chair, he felt the weight of his phone in his pocket. He pondered whether to mention his one-sided conversations.

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  1. derekmcmillan1951Derek McMillan says

    November 14, 2019 at 6:30 am

    I thought this was a touching story. I still talk to those who are dead but I usually do this in dreams and reveries.

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  2. Bec says

    November 14, 2019 at 7:33 am

    A poignant tale. I enjoyed reading this.

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  3. Archie Iyer says

    November 14, 2019 at 9:33 am

    Touching story.. narrated well..

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  4. Alex Tolansky says

    November 14, 2019 at 10:30 am

    This is a thought-provoking tale, very sad. We say ‘bereavement counsellor’ in England, and because the word ‘grief’ has connotations of hassle/trouble (like ‘stop giving me grief’), there wasn’t in my mind an immediate link to a death. It was only when I read a feedback comment that it made perfect sense.

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  5. Adelaide says

    November 14, 2019 at 11:04 am

    Poignant and sad and so true for many of us who have lost loved ones.

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  6. Raymond Sloan says

    November 15, 2019 at 1:32 am

    Well done, Angie.

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  7. Rebecca says

    November 25, 2019 at 2:55 pm

    Very moving?

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  8. Leonard H Mooring says

    November 27, 2019 at 3:44 pm

    Splendid. I got wet eyes.

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