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Autumn Evening

January 29, 2016 5 Comments

Autumn Evening

By Dave Donovan

It is a way of marking the season, like the squalls of locust leaves and the bend of wild beach grass. Every fall a deer—its belly a black, stretched crater—hangs from the thick arm of my neighbor’s giant oak.

This doe was in the wrong place during a two-week frenzy of false fawn bleating and silent camouflage and death.

Out with the dog under the quiet frost of night, I sometimes hear the creak of rope, a straining under the pendulum of bound hooves. She’s twisting, kicking to free herself, to search for her sacred entrails and her life.

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  1. BadgerConvoy says

    January 29, 2016 at 8:53 am

    great piece. Has more power than its few words suggest.

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  2. katejones73 says

    January 30, 2016 at 3:07 am

    Very powerful imagery evoked in this – well done:)

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  3. Bobby Warner says

    January 30, 2016 at 9:08 pm

    A splendid story; wonderful imagery; great job.

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  4. Joan C. says

    February 1, 2016 at 8:53 am

    Vibrant imagery. So much tension. Nice writing!

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  5. Laura Lovic-Lindsay says

    February 27, 2016 at 10:01 am

    This is poetry masquerading as prose. Lol. Such beauty.

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