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Avocado

December 1, 2015 3 Comments

Avocado

By Luq Hamaki

Suddenly, the woman beside me pulls an avocado from her purse. I can think of many dirty jokes to entertain myself if it was a banana…but not an avocado. I can’t take my eyes off her, watching as she cuts open the fruit with a plastic knife and begins to eat the succulent flesh.

Her eyes meet mine, and a rush of awkwardness fills the air. I attempt to turn the atmosphere around by nodding to her. “Best breakfast ever, right?”

She promptly exits the bus, glancing back in fear of a repeat performance.

I guess I’m having Chipotle for lunch.

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  1. Lisa Scuderi-Burkimsher says

    December 1, 2015 at 6:36 pm

    Well written and humorous.

    Reply
    • Luq Hamaki says

      December 2, 2015 at 11:34 am

      Thank you so much! I appreciate it!

      Reply
  2. Jon Sindell says

    December 31, 2015 at 7:02 pm

    More proof that public transit is a great source of material for a writer. And inspiration for lunch!

    Reply

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