By Liam Ashby
Pain was suddenly a fuzzy cloud, out of reach. I was lying at an unfamiliar angle, impossible in my old bed with the stiff mattress.
A bright light engulfed me, and I could sense little else. Like the light had taken away my ability to hear more than the hum of muffled voices, and no minute smell or taste ever seemed to activate the delicate hairs in my nose.
An instant later, a cacophony of noises and an explosion of pain wracked me. The light softened very slightly.
“He’s awake!” announced the doctor. “How long was he gone?”
“Three. Three seconds dead.”
Nice ending.
Creepu.
Thank you, but it really happened to me. Perhaps not in as many words.
Powerful. Well written
I want to read more! Love it ?
This is brilliant and really drew me in!! Great Job bud