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Awakening

July 15, 2016 5 Comments

Awakening

By Tom Minder

Walden slept peacefully on Easter eve. Other children lay thinking of chocolate eggs, Peeps, and stuffed bunnies, but his parents insisted on healthier treats. Easter morning he examined the basket: a carob egg, vegan candy.

He opened a small packet expecting Rain Forest trading cards. Instead, Ryan Howard, holding a Louisville Slugger, smiled back. There were cards with other heroes, too. He opened a multicolored package: a tall chocolate bunny. Walden broke off the head and gobbled it in several bites. He smiled at his parents. Chocolate teeth, chocolate tongue, chocolate lips.

River looked at Prudence. “Sorry. Had to try it.”

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  1. Gina Zaragoza says

    July 15, 2016 at 10:39 am

    Nicely done, and next Easter eve, he will not sleep peacefully.

    Reply
  2. Joanna Bressler says

    July 15, 2016 at 1:57 pm

    Charming story.

    Reply
  3. Bobby Warner says

    July 15, 2016 at 8:44 pm

    A nice, cozy little story. Liked it.

    Reply
  4. dontassone says

    July 18, 2016 at 5:29 am

    Who is awakening here? Love it.

    Reply
  5. dontassone says

    July 18, 2016 at 5:14 am

    So who is awakening? Love it.

    Reply

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