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Awesome Beauty

May 8, 2017 6 Comments

Awesome Beauty

By Jack Spies

Cautiously, he opened the door of his deep forest cabin, and there, about twenty feet away, she stood. Amber light, streaming from her eyes, plunged the moonless night into midday. He paused, rapt and expectant, as if waiting for a command or permission to act.

Not what he had expected from the advertisement, ‘Lonely soul desiring satisfying companionship with kindred spirit.’ Nevertheless, seeing her, he could envision it: a complete, fulfilling relationship.

Indeed, more than a relationship: a communion. Now, face to face with her awesome beauty, he was overcome with fear, and stepped back, closing the door behind him—securely.

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  1. Esme upon the Cloud says

    May 8, 2017 at 7:21 am

    Poignant stuff this Jack, beautifully written, and so very often the way life goes.

    Reply
    • Jack says

      May 8, 2017 at 8:22 am

      Alas, Esme upon the Cloud. Alas. Thanks for your kind and thoughtful words, Esme; insightful as usual.

      Reply
  2. Irene says

    May 8, 2017 at 11:19 am

    Awesome story.

    Reply
    • Jack says

      May 8, 2017 at 12:09 pm

      Thanks, Irene.

      Reply
  3. Swarn Gill says

    May 8, 2017 at 3:29 pm

    This story was just beautiful. Well done!

    Reply
    • Jack Spies says

      May 10, 2017 at 5:53 pm

      Thank you very much, Swarn.

      Reply

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