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Bacchanal

February 22, 2016 7 Comments

Bacchanal

By Jayne Thickett

At Delphi they tore the bull limb from limb. Steaming gore slicked their naked flesh. They guzzled its blood like cheap wine fortifying their hearts and loins.

As they whirled and leapt around the fire, flames painted their glistening skin, and flickered in their obsidian eyes. Arms raised to the skies, they sent forth cries of ecstasy: entreaties to Dionysus to take possession of their bodies and souls.

Three days later, these would-be maenads are back to scrubbing their husbands’ robes in the river. For some, the blood beneath their fingernails is enough, while others become distant memories, never seen again.

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Comments

  1. John La Briola says

    February 22, 2016 at 12:06 pm

    Wow. Fantastic. Sisters are doin’ it for themselves.

    Reply
    • Jayne says

      February 22, 2016 at 1:42 pm

      Many thanks for reading!

      Reply
  2. TISA GARRISON says

    February 22, 2016 at 2:17 pm

    Some readers are well-versed on Greek and Roman mythology and rather purist about historical attributions. Your imagery is vivid and sensual and the compare/contrast is powerful. Look forward to reading more from you.

    Reply
    • Jayne says

      February 22, 2016 at 3:11 pm

      Thank you for your wonderful comment!

      Reply
  3. Fran Scott says

    February 22, 2016 at 4:41 pm

    Enjoyed the vivid imagery!

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  4. Bobby Warner says

    February 22, 2016 at 9:09 pm

    Fast, furious and imagery-laden (with mythology too boot); this one is a winner!

    Reply
  5. Jayne says

    February 23, 2016 at 1:59 pm

    Thank you, Fran and Bobby. Appreciate it.

    Reply

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