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Band Aid

August 2, 2020 12 Comments

By Lori Cramer

Bud’s been a wreck since the band broke up. He sleeps all day and glares at his guitar all night. When I’m at work, he forgets to eat. He doesn’t forget to check his texts, though. He’s waiting for an apology from Denny. One that’ll never come. I try to distract Bud from his unmitigated misery by putting on the baseball game right after dinner, talking to him about hitters’ counts and launch angles, but it’s no use. He can’t focus on anything except the band. So I do what’s best for everybody: I call Denny and tell him Bud’s sorry.

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  1. Vivian says

    August 2, 2020 at 8:28 am

    Loved the unexpected ending!

    Reply
    • Lori says

      August 2, 2020 at 2:54 pm

      Thanks, Vivian!

      Reply
  2. David says

    August 2, 2020 at 9:45 am

    This is nicely crafted, with a perfect title too.

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    • Lori says

      August 2, 2020 at 2:55 pm

      Thank you, David!

      Reply
  3. Raima Larter says

    August 2, 2020 at 12:32 pm

    Ha! Great story. Great title, too!

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    • Lori says

      August 2, 2020 at 2:56 pm

      Thanks, Raima!

      Reply
  4. Stella Klein says

    August 2, 2020 at 1:03 pm

    Nicely rich. Depicts character and relationships in so few words.

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    • Lori says

      August 2, 2020 at 2:58 pm

      Thank you for your kind words, Stella.

      Reply
  5. Steve says

    August 2, 2020 at 8:24 pm

    Loved it. I hope the band will rise like a Phoenix.

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    • Lori says

      August 3, 2020 at 2:17 pm

      Thanks, Steve.

      Reply
  6. Shoshauna Shy says

    August 3, 2020 at 1:50 pm

    Love this. A lot of compassion and understanding in it.

    Reply
    • Lori says

      August 3, 2020 at 2:20 pm

      Thank you, Shoshauna.

      Reply

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