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Bandelier

June 7, 2023 4 Comments

By Elizabeth Downing

I reached out for his hand, the one that wielded the lead pipe that had broken my nose an hour earlier.

“I need your strength,” I said.

He didn’t take it right away. Later, he would move closer, inch by inch. He would lie next to me. Would be the reason I slept while breathing through a narrowed nasal cavity.

He would never say he was sorry, but I didn’t expect that from an eight-year-old. It would be added to the sum of things done for my children that hurt me but helped them. Never, ever, would that equation balance.

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  1. Abha Prakash says

    June 7, 2023 at 7:22 am

    A story of courage and resilence that only a mother would understand.

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  2. Stephanie Mordi says

    June 7, 2023 at 11:09 am

    Loved this!

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  3. Sandra says

    June 12, 2023 at 7:29 pm

    So sweet and true. Mother’s do have unconditional love. Thank you for sharing.

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  4. Robert Burns says

    June 13, 2023 at 10:36 am

    This is a wonderfully powerful story, Elizabeth. Well done!

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