By Roy Dorman
“I think he saw me.”
“Who saw you?”
“Your husband. I was parked down the street waiting for him to leave and I must have been daydreaming.”
“About me?”
“Listen. If he did see me and then sees me again anywhere around here, he’ll start down the path of thinking something’s going on between the two of us.”
“Well, there is something going on between the two of us.”
“Will you be serious?”
“No, I think I’d rather be playful. But you can be serious if you want to be. You always are.”
“Hmmm. Ya know, maybe he didn’t see me.”
Roy,
When your reader laughs out loud you know you’ve hit the mark.
Well done……..
Thanks, Carrick. I’ve heard laughing out loud is supposed to be good for your health.
Incredibly lively. I felt like I was in a revolving door! Great job!
Glad you liked it, Bobby. Your comments are always thoughtful.
Great dialogue, Roy. Conflict, climax, and reversal are all there. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks for your comments, gavinritchie. They are appreciated.