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Beaten to It

November 27, 2018 9 Comments

Beaten To It

By Karen B. Kaplan

Bridget, a hospice patient, startled the staff by using a dating app. Without mentioning hospice, she wrote, “Short-term relationship highly desired with man attracted to the unexpected.” Albert, looking for a “carefree romp,” figured he had found his match. After arriving at the residence and eyeing ‘Pleasantville Hospice’ on the front door, he stopped dead in his tracks and wanted to sprint back to his car. But break a promise? No. As he neared Bridget’s room, he thought from her deep sighs he was too late. He was, but not because of dying. A male nurse had succumbed to her charms.

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  1. cascondaville says

    November 27, 2018 at 8:19 am

    Brilliant!

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  2. b. says

    November 27, 2018 at 9:17 am

    LOL! Loved and appreciated the thought. Your delivery and timing were perfect.

    Reply
  3. dianne moritz says

    November 27, 2018 at 11:29 am

    unexpected! very good….

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  4. glkamens says

    November 27, 2018 at 4:41 pm

    I liked “stopped dead in his tracks.” So he didn’t need a hospice after all! Jerry

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    • Karen B. Kaplan says

      November 27, 2018 at 5:58 pm

      That’s the way! Humor paid back with more humor.

      Reply
  5. Mark Reels says

    November 27, 2018 at 8:05 pm

    Yes! Yes! And yes! I have cancer and by God’s Grace this will be me!

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    • Karen B. Kaplan says

      November 27, 2018 at 10:49 pm

      Thus life-affirming feelings such as romantic attraction can occur in the unlikeliest of settings, like those sea creatures that form in the very murkiest of the ocean depths.

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  6. Mary E Falkner says

    November 28, 2018 at 1:46 am

    Great idea, superb execution.

    Reply
  7. Anna says

    November 28, 2018 at 5:59 am

    This is great. Thank you!

    Reply

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