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Bedtime Story

March 20, 2016 10 Comments

Bedtime Story

By Stephanie Hutton

It’s Mummy’s turn to put me to bed.

“Once there was a beautiful princess, as free as the birds…”

Mummy’s wine sloshes gently, the glass as thin and perfect as she was before she had me.

“Now where was I?” she says, dragging her eyes back to me. She doesn’t tell me what happened to the princess.

Mummy pulls up the covers to tuck me in. For just a second, I worry that she will put them right over my ugly face.

“I’m sorry,” I say, because my aching tummy tells me to.

Her kiss only ever comes after lights out.

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Comments

  1. Bobby Warner says

    March 20, 2016 at 10:05 am

    Wow, a truly tender, bitter-sweet story. A Winner!

    Reply
    • Stephanie Hutton says

      March 21, 2016 at 5:11 am

      Thank you Bobby ?

      Reply
      • Stephanie Hutton says

        March 21, 2016 at 5:16 am

        That wasn’t supposed to be a question mark at the end, must be my insecurity directing my finger taps 😉

        Reply
  2. writingmywayoutofdepression says

    March 20, 2016 at 11:07 am

    What a sad little tale. Very thought provoking.

    Reply
  3. William Shaw says

    March 20, 2016 at 12:44 pm

    Really poignant little story. Well done!

    Reply
  4. Laura Lovic-Lindsay says

    March 20, 2016 at 2:41 pm

    I want to hug everyone in this story. I’m sorry. You did this so well.

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    • Stephanie Hutton says

      March 21, 2016 at 5:12 am

      Really interesting you were able to empathise with the mother too, thank you.

      Reply
  5. John La Briola says

    March 21, 2016 at 1:19 am

    As painful as it is masterful. Impressive piece!

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    • Stephanie Hutton says

      March 21, 2016 at 5:14 am

      Thank you John. The painful stories seem to leap to mind fastest. I don’t think I have had the compliment of my writing as masterful before, that made my morning!

      Reply
  6. Smila W. Planete says

    March 22, 2016 at 12:50 pm

    A very thoughtful story. The best stories, I find, are the simplest ones. They touch the soul in the most unaffected and direct way. Thank you for writing this.

    Reply

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